Each post is a tiny bread crumb torn from my memory's pantry
August 1, 2010 § 8 Comments
I want to forget
Each piece of me
That is you
Nice way to put it when a relationship ends; brief to the point words. Has a good impact to the reader. Hope things will improve as time goes by.
Time has a healing power. It also offers fresh perspectives on love’s blinding powers.
A very deep poem…three lines that speak volumes.
Thanks. They scream inside of me.
Great rhythm, i love how this isn’t your normal haiku but it’s not a bop haiku either – it has it’s own strange structure. Sad poem, but strong and firm! Wonderful piece, I enjoyed it =) ~Spencer Hudson
When I wrote it in my book it was just one line. But I broke it up to add emphasis and focus. I wanted each line to resonate loudly. Thank you for noticing the non 5-7-5 format. I always do appreciate your thoughts : )
Awww… the hurt that love tends to bring with it…
Beautifully put in such few words! A lovely poem…
Heartache is a dangerous if not handled wisely. I’ve had my fair share of heartache. I just rather hurt than to allow my love turn into hate. Thank you for finding beauty in my writing.
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