Just call me her name…
June 28, 2010 § 11 Comments
It’s ok really
Come on in
Don’t be nervous
I’m not here to hear you explain
Take off your clothes
Come here lie next to me
Just call me her name
Oh she? She’s not coming
I saw your text that’s how I found the place
She seemed really nice when I called
So come
Get comfortable
Undress me like you would her
Then make love to me like you have before
Except pretend that I’m her
I’m curious to know what side of you she gets
This isn’t trick or some weird fight
Just call me her name
And make this a memorable night
I liked this poem…a chilling take on infidelity.
Chilling for whom??
Maybe you should scratch your nails down someone else’s back. That is a great poem.
LMAO! Thanks for always contributing to my blog Curtis ❤
That made me sit back in my chair and take a deep breath. I am stunned! That was just wonderful.
Many times to exhausted reaction is to fight at either the mistress or the lover, why no take a different approach. I’m shocked and flattered something I wrote would have you stunned ❤
That was fabulous! I felt I was watching a movie… ok, a scene maybe! But seriously, an awesome depiction of .. well.. you know what!
Haha you made me blush! Thank you Kavita!!
What is amazing about this piece is the detachment, and yet at the same time the need to compare herself to the other woman and also the differences in the way he makes love to the two of them. To record and find perhaps if he is erotically and sensually enamored more of which one and if so, who is receiving the best parts of their lover. This is a fascinating piece, that grips a real situation in the modern world, where physical love is able to be contained as just that without affecting emotional attachment. Very interesting and very well written. I’d like to invite you to visit 1markt.wordpress.com if your time allows and if moved to please leave a comment.
Invitation accepted : )
Wow..sharon stone getting out her pike to crucify the guy. Chilling!